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X-Men: Trigger Scent

Young mutant Wingbat has had a crush on the beautiful, quiet X-23 for a long time. Now that he finally has a way to get with her, though, he's not so sure it's a great idea...

Commission for Wingbat.



Chapter 1 - Dilemma
Submitted: July 29, 2014 • Updated: July 29, 2014
Word count: 2639 • Size: 14k • Comments: 0 • views: 8316

Chapter 2 - Consequences
Submitted: July 29, 2014 • Updated: July 29, 2014
Word count: 9753 • Size: 55k • Comments: 0 • views: 9803


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Atsik101 on August 19, 2016, 3:46:45 PM

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Atsik101That was AWESOME! I really like the idea of the incredible hot X-23 getting fuck by Wingbat when he's in his giant size forms! Kind a like how it happened in a flash video in this site: http:// anythinggoesastimegoes. tumblr. com/

scrubs2009 on January 13, 2015, 5:48:43 PM

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scrubs2009Hey it's probably too late but can we get more of this? Like 70 more chapters?

Wingbat on January 20, 2015, 2:14:45 AM

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WingbatOh believe me, I've been bugging Contingency about another commission for 6 months now. As soon as he finishes his current big writing project and opens up commissions again, expect more of this. Finally, and this is a shameless teaser, I'm in the process of adapting this story into a comic and I think the result will be awesome!

scrubs2009 on January 23, 2015, 5:57:19 PM

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scrubs2009GET HYPED!!!

Wirewolf16 on June 7, 2015, 2:14:03 PM

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Wirewolf16We lost the breaks! I repeat: THE HYPE TRAIN HAS LOST IT'S BREAKS!!!

MurasakiTsukimaru on September 30, 2014, 10:38:54 PM

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MurasakiTsukimaruI could say an awful lot about this story. I think I'll stick with a simple, "Damn!"

Waffleface on September 9, 2014, 8:32:48 PM

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WafflefaceThat was amazing.

I was about to complain that this was basically rape, but that was a nice little twist.

God work.

Wingbat on September 10, 2014, 1:07:20 AM

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WingbatYeah, it was important to me to peel away those layers at the end. Even after it's revealed that the trigger scent is bunk and the real "trigger scent" is Wingbat's musk and that X-23 is very much into everything, it doesn't change the fact that Wingbat doesn't know that when he makes his decision to use it. His choice is wrong, immoral, bad. Very bad. He actually is a decent guy, though (no, really!) and does genuinely love Laura and would never take advantage of her in that way, so it was important to include the little coda where we learn that Emma is behind some mental manipulation, lowering inhibitions, pushing and prodding. Obivously, it's her voice in his head earlier in the story, the devil on his shoulder opposite Xavier.

Do the ends justify the means, like Emma thinks? That's up to the reader to decide, I guess, but Wingbat and X-23 sure aren't complaining.

Waffleface on September 10, 2014, 8:47:05 PM

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WafflefaceHm. Good point.

RobertoCasas on September 2, 2014, 2:15:35 PM

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RobertoCasasGreat story, your pacing and action are perfect as always. And now I'm running Wingbat through the Marvel encyclopedia in my head lol.

Contingency on September 3, 2014, 1:02:20 PM

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Wingbat on July 30, 2014, 12:22:41 PM

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WingbatThanks again for taking on this commission and bringing it to life so vividly. Love it!

slicerness on July 29, 2014, 8:43:32 PM

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slicernessHuh, and here I thought X-23 was the one who put the trigger online. Very well written though, even if it was pretty obvious SOMEONE at the manor was the seller.

BlackRevenant on July 29, 2014, 6:18:37 PM

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BlackRevenantAt first I thought it was X that posted it.